Write about a hobby or interest to convince others to also take it onboard. Given that this is a persuasive text, follow the typical structure: 

• Introduction: hook (rhetorical questions, anecdote, statistic) / introduce topic/ state opinion/ state reasons 

• Body paragraphs: PEEL (point, explain, example, link)

• Conclusion: restate opinion/ restate reasons/ leave memorable summary 

Introduction: hook/ introduce topic/ state opinion / state three reasons

What happens if your loved one falls into a deep pool of water and needs to be saved? Swimming is not only an adored pastime, but it is a necessary skill that everyone should learn. Improving swimming increases safety and protection in emergencies and saves lives. Moreover, swimming is an effective physical activity to improve cardiovascular health and mental health. Lastly, swimming is a great social activity which can connect you with new communities both indoors and outdoors. 

Body Paragraphs: PEEL 

Point/ Example/ Explain/ Link

Firstly, swimming is an essential skill to ensure safety. In Australia, many families go to the beach or to waterparks, presenting the risk of drowning and water accidents. By equipping oneself with swimming skills, one can save families who are drowning and also rescue oneself from fatal scenarios. Moreover, watersports like kayaking, canoeing and snorkelling, are much safer when they are performed by individuals with adept swimming skills. In summary, swimming skills improve protection and safety at the beach, inside pools and during watersports.